Panther
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Post by Panther on Apr 19, 2012 12:54:21 GMT -5
What was left when that fire was gone I thought it felt right but that right was wrong All caught up in the eye of the storm And trying to figure out what it's like moving on And I don't even know what kind of things I said My mouth kept moving and my mind went dead Picking up the pieces, now where to begin? The hardest part of ending is starting again
I was thinking that the bolded part could be like part of the plot for like pyrostream. Its just a thought. How raccoontail dies saving one of her kits, which would be the fire part and so on.
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Post by redwhisker on Apr 20, 2012 12:44:38 GMT -5
i love it! perfect!
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